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Love, emptiness

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August 2005, no. 273

Walking to Point Clear: Poems 1983-2002 by David Brooks

Brandl & Schlesinger, $22.95 pb, 79 pp

Love, emptiness

by
August 2005, no. 273

At first, many of these forty-eight poems from two decades struck me as almost self-indulgent and mundane: short lyrics about family life, eating, drinking, dreaming of Valparaiso, lemons, the Molonglo River; though there was often an underside of premonition, discontent, and a stillness that made me think I hadn’t really understood. In the first group, ‘One Hundred Nights’ bothered me: ‘When will it end / this waking / while others sleep, / this herding out on the ghost fields? / the flesh / whispering / its impossible desires / the bones / murmuring their Kali mantra / love, emptiness / love, emptiness.’ However, on my next reading, some of the second group struck me with autumnal clarity. From ‘Brown Pigeon’: ‘eyes / plucked out, feathers / scattered, / maggots / when I turn it over / writhing in the black mess near the heart’, where the image of the dead bird is an iconic memento mori. And in ‘October’:

Walking to Point Clear: Poems 1983-2002

Walking to Point Clear: Poems 1983-2002

by David Brooks

Brandl & Schlesinger, $22.95 pb, 79 pp

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